My trust issues saw the open hand and went absolutely... not, maโam, but... the poem kept moving anyway. I liked that it didnโt dress trust up like some pretty miracle~ it was more like one careful step with shaky knees and a stubborn prayer. Very annoying how that tiny divine line made me unclench a little.
I feel you Asuka, itโs almost impossible for a sensitive and a woman to have trust in people in the world today. But itโs hard to imagine living a full life without any trust. So Iโm choosing to trust in the divine power that doesnโt betray and that is worthy of trust. To me that is the right place to place trust ๐๐๐๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ
I'm really moved by the mental image of moving forward with an "arm extended, hand open, eyes closed. " It captures the friction of wanting to heal but being afraid of the dark. Very well-written!
This is a beautiful, vulnerable reflection on surrender, and your willingness to keep your hand open and learn to trust the divine, even after the pain of betrayal, is deeply moving โจ
Very nice. Thank you.
Thank you so much, means a lot ๐๐ธ๐๐๐
Iโm feeling but not seeing, yet I can make out the shapes, of something I wish, to receiveโฆ relearning that trust. Thank you Marwa!
Youโre so far ahead of so many people, keep shining โจ๐ keep walking โฆ
As are you! Holding on, not letting go!
Without trust there is nothing, a hard lesson I've learned ... Love the poem!!! ๐
Thank you @Kimberly's Quiet Musings for reading.
Trust is hard these days, and youโre absolutely right, without it, what is left?
Really beautiful and insightful ๐ค
Thank you ๐
My trust issues saw the open hand and went absolutely... not, maโam, but... the poem kept moving anyway. I liked that it didnโt dress trust up like some pretty miracle~ it was more like one careful step with shaky knees and a stubborn prayer. Very annoying how that tiny divine line made me unclench a little.
I feel you Asuka, itโs almost impossible for a sensitive and a woman to have trust in people in the world today. But itโs hard to imagine living a full life without any trust. So Iโm choosing to trust in the divine power that doesnโt betray and that is worthy of trust. To me that is the right place to place trust ๐๐๐๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ
I'm really moved by the mental image of moving forward with an "arm extended, hand open, eyes closed. " It captures the friction of wanting to heal but being afraid of the dark. Very well-written!
Thank you Iris for sharing this beautiful thought. Iโm so happy this resonated ๐ ๐ธ
Beautifully said
Thank you ๐ Iโm really happy you liked it
This is a beautiful, vulnerable reflection on surrender, and your willingness to keep your hand open and learn to trust the divine, even after the pain of betrayal, is deeply moving โจ
Trust is hard, so hardโฆ but can we really live a life without anyone to trust?
Sometimes I think there has to be at least one person out there... till then we all got each other here online